Film Studies and Cinematography- Project 1: Story
08.05.2024- 11.06.2024/ Week 4-Week 11
Kelly Lau Jie Ning/ 0354839
Film Studies and Cinematography/ Bachelor of Design (Honors) in Creative Media
Project 1: Story
INSTRUCTION
Project 1: Story
This project requires us to develop a 30-second - 1-minute short story that
will be a 2D animation as the final output.
Before starting to write my story, I tried to look for references on Youtube
Progress
This is the first version of my story. However, the stories are too boring so
I am trying to improve them. I picked story 1 to continue to improve.
After that, the story became like this. However, I got feedback from my friend
that the story was still too boring. So, I decided to change the whole story.
The second reference animation gave me a big idea that I can write a reverse
video. I think that will be a fun story. Because people always think of things
as complicated, but with the right approach, things can be solved quite
simply. So I wrote this story.
After that, I tried to make it in full story. I got feedback from Mr Kamal that the he didn't expect things to be solved with a ball of wool.
I think there are too many sound effects. So I change the sound effect to
music. That means that the music will change when turns to the battle scene
and the battle scene ends.
Final output
Reflection
In this project, I write my own story. When I am writing the story, I always keep brainstorming. Whenever I write a story, I always keep asking my friends what they think about my story. I learned that it's important that we get feedback from the audience, so we can tell if we've written a good story if we're constantly gathering feedback from the audience. Furthermore, we also need to watch more good work that will let us know what the audience really wants. The story also needs to have a climax if not the story will be very flat and not interesting.
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